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Second Thoughts? by *RivkaZ:iconRivkaZ:

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Submitted: May 3, 2005
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They say a kiss with open eyes is a warning to betrayal.
Shall we live for love or hate?
War makes attraction fatal.

I'm not sure what's going through his head at this point.

Good 'ol fangirlish 13x6 smuttiness.
God Forgive me. I'm usually against such things.
It was the hormones. I swear- they took over my brain. You know how it is, yes?
AND BEHOLD! I have not emasculated Treize! It must be an end-of-passover miracle.
ah well. :heart:

GW, Treize, Zechs © to Sunrise/Sotsu Agency 1996.

Done in= ink. surprise surprise.

EDIT: TAY!!! I fixed a few little things like *cough* eye placement in photoshop. I can't fix all the problems with the poor man's face- but he looks less like an alien now. I think. See, I have this problem. I need vision corrections that allows me to see past my artistic flaws. I just can't SEE half of the glitches I draw- which is why so much of it turns out... lopsided. ^^;
Please tell me if it looks moderately better. *sigh*
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~IceyArticuno:iconIceyArticuno: May 3, 2005, 5:45:52 AM
Aww...;) :heart: It's just cute, and it does make you wonder what Trieze is thinking, what with that expression of his. XD

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The greatest reward is not JUST watching those who are already great, but watching those who are just starting out and watching them, helping them grow. That is true satisfaction.
So, please, use constructive critcism.
~Haru-de-Meziere:iconHaru-de-Meziere: May 3, 2005, 5:46:35 AM
Beautiful detail in the hair.

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"Symmetry is boredom, the quintessence of mourning." -Hugo

"Thank Heaven I was not born before the coming of tea." -Reverend Sydney Smith
*RivkaZ:iconRivkaZ: May 3, 2005, 10:25:24 AM
wah thank you! ^^ I worked hard on that, I'm glad you like! :heart:

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~Resolved-
The Human race is defective and should be abolished so it may be replaced with something sane.

~"It's a well-known fact. Everything sounds better in Latin."
~"The word 'Whatever' is not so much a linguistic fragment as it is a way
~belosnezhka:iconbelosnezhka: May 3, 2005, 2:19:01 PM
Argh! Why must you draw hair with such spiffyness?? :heart: To regress back to my old fangirly self, I must say Ee! I love that couple! :D

I just have one critique, I hope you don't mind, which is that Treize's eye is not in the right place. I think it's just a little too high, and maybe too far to the center. It's extremely hard to draw a face that is half hidden. You should try sketching it in first, then drawing the other head over it.

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"I like my coffee like I like my women. In a plastic cup." ~Eddie Izzard
*RivkaZ:iconRivkaZ: May 3, 2005, 4:01:57 PM
>D AH-HAH! THE LOPSIDEDNESS! We meet again, my old 'friend'! AND NOT FOR THE LAST TIME! Too often have you skewed mah artses into CRAZY SHAPES! I curse you.
But mebbe- it is not too late to fix ¬¬ *pokes photoshop* I am not above hiding the original sketch under my bed and fixing the details in a digital medium. perhaps I shall attempt it...

:love: Aaah! I was waiting for you to notice the hair- I wuz like... "Hey- I'm drawing hair. I hope Bel likes it" XD YAY!!!
:giggle: Eeeh! :heart:

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~Resolved-
The Human race is defective and should be abolished so it may be replaced with something sane.

~"It's a well-known fact. Everything sounds better in Latin."
~"The word 'Whatever' is not so much a linguistic fragment as it is a way
~Sixwing:iconSixwing: May 3, 2005, 4:22:22 PM
Very nice job with the hair! To add to 's critique, the ear is high, too...

[fangirl]
SQUEE
*explodes*
[/fangirl]

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We are, each of us, angels with only one wing; and we can only fly by embracing one another.
~Luciano de Crescenzo

*christians
~milliardofanclub
~Sixwing:iconSixwing: May 3, 2005, 4:23:26 PM
Apologies for the second post: I didn't notice the crosshatching in the smaller view. Excellent details.

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We are, each of us, angels with only one wing; and we can only fly by embracing one another.
~Luciano de Crescenzo

*christians
~milliardofanclub
~belosnezhka:iconbelosnezhka: May 3, 2005, 7:39:22 PM
A lot better now :) I know what you mean about seeing your own flaws, though-- It's like when you draw something and think it's great, and then a few months later you look at it and go "what the hell was I thinking??" XD I guess the only thing you can do is keep drawing. You''ll keep improving and your style will keep changing. I can tell you though, that I have seen a real improvement since you came to DA :D

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"I like my coffee like I like my women. In a plastic cup." ~Eddie Izzard
*akikodate:iconakikodate: May 3, 2005, 8:54:43 PM
Oooh...lovely!

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"The H and K stand for Hugs and Kisses 8D"

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